Oscar remembers his past and wonders why he is still a loser. That is until he meets the woman of his dreams.

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Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

That is closer but if he has to convince himself she is the woman of his dreams she probably isn't, I would word that different.

Patrick · Logliner · 410 pts

I really appreciate the assistance Gentlemen.

How about this one?

During the course of his routine loser life, Oscar, meets the woman of his dreams, and must convince himself and his friends that she's the one.

sharkeatingman · Mentor · 3,435 pts

This is more of a "tagline", which is an advertising tool. A "logline" sums up the concept in 30 words or less, and should contain a protagonist, a specific antagonist, the goals, the obstacles, the "hook", the stakes, some irony, and an idea of the genre.

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