Sept. 1st 1939, identical twin boys celebrate their 16th birthday in a small village outside of Berlin. One is a “cock of the walk” the other shy and sensitive. They become enemies when the new girl in town falls in love with one but stays faithful to the other. 5 years later in the Battle of Berlin each boy must save the others life in order to save his own.

I can't quite figure out the causal connection between the romantic rivalry and the Battle of Berlin. The general concept seems to be that twin brothers who fight against each other in peace must learn to fight together in war in order to survive.

I can't quite figure out the causal connection between the romantic rivalry and the Battle of Berlin. The general concept seems to be that twin brothers who fight against each other in peace must learn to fight together in war in order to survive.

Like how a historic date and the brothers' birthday coincide (Sept. 1). It, and other elements in the log line have a lot of potential for poignancy. Overall, I like the idea, setting, etc. The log line's word count seems a bit high, however. Overall, a pretty cool post, nonetheless. FYI: "others" should be changed to "others'".