Series logline:“During the Great Die-Up of 1886, a frontiersman with a dark, shameful past must protect the family he’s taking refuge with from his old Civil War captain, now a deranged U.S. Marshal, who along with his posse is under orders from an unscrupulous company to take their land.

Thats okay. It will but not in the pilot.

It sounds like a movie, not a series. Try another series logline, a first season logline if there's more than one, and a pilot logline.

thedarkhorse:

Thanks for the clarification.? ?Your clarification re-frames the story in my semi-deranged brain.

On the aspect of the story involving the Native Americans, I presume your story deals with the irony and tragedy that the main? White characters are fighting over land that originally and rightfully belongs to the Native Americans.? The Whites are immigrant invaders, usurpers, squatters.