“Set in a futuristic world where humans are controlled by their fascist government, a career criminal gets drawn into a deadly plot when he rescues a upper class woman from the secret police and has to depend on her to survive.”

It sounds more like the woman is your real protagonist. She does more...

The logline keeps morphing such that I'm not sure what the kernel of the idea really is. Whatever, I suggest raising the stakes for the man: it's not a matter of just locating his daughter, it's also matter of also saving her life before...?

The logline keeps morphing such that I'm not sure what the kernel of the idea really is. Whatever, I suggest raising the stakes for the man: it's not a matter of just locating his daughter, it's also matter of also saving her life before...?