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In stead of "when many people are fleeing from brutal totalitarian regimes to pursue their dreams in the land of freedom and opportunity, Australia" try:
"when Communist agents team up with corrupt police in 1970's Australia, ..."
Next, I would expect something along the lines of:
"a [main character description] must [main goal description]."
Hopefully the goal will clarify how the communists and police are antagonistic forces.
Good luck!
This is an interesting set-up for a story.
However a logline is usually told from the point of view of the lead character. It gives the character a goal and tells who or what is standing in the way.
I can't tell who the lead character is from your logline. Is it one of the corrupt police officers or possibly one of the communist agents?
I think this is a great idea for a story and if you focus on the lead character, your logline will better reflect your stories potential.
Hope that helps, good luck with this!
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