Under the glitz and glamour of TV Drama, Film, TVCs, follicle implants amid the ever-present stench of aspiration, a family comedy-drama unfolds between matriarch APRIL and her narcissistic son LUKE who’s keen to take over the agency’s reins. Supported by a cast of celebrities, everyday people with ambition in the entertainment industry and members of the audience who try their luck auditioning a risky project the agency’s casting; APRIL and LUKE strive for dizzy heights indeed.

Is this the story of a strong matriarch and her likeable, but hapless son? I don't understand what the dizzy heights are and for whom - the mother and son team or the people who are auditioning with them? Karel is right. Needs to be more clear. Have fun.

Hi Hugh, Thanks for posting! I know this is long for a logline - see what you can cut to start with - but I thought I'd fix the post, as you had the title in the field for the actual logline... :)

(Ooooh... I notice I have now also entered the sacred realm of the triple-digiters.)

Perhaps to start off, have a read of the tips elswhere on this site ("Write It"), focusing on the main character and main goal (Luke wants to take over the agency?), then tell us how this came about. What happened to him so this became a necessity (probably the Inciting Incident). Next, be specific about the obstacles in his way.

Good luck!