Six unknowingly linked and naive characters in, Edinburgh and London, struggle to find love in their stormy relationships before it is too late.

This logline seems to be written from the outside looking in, instead of from the characters point of view.

As a result, the logline comes across impersonal and as Karel said, the logline doesn't sell (The Story)

As Karel said.? Although in romances, where plots usually pivot on a relationship, a logline focusing on dual protagonists may work.

Also I suggest "before it is too late" needs clarification.? Too late for what?? Like, is a female's biological click ticking?? Or...?

As Karel said.? Although in romances, where plots usually pivot on a relationship, a logline focusing on dual protagonists may work.

Also I suggest "before it is too late" needs clarification.? Too late for what?? Like, is a female's biological click ticking?? Or...?