Tehran Kids is a Persian Series about Group of Music that they wanna get justification But something unexpected occurs to each member of the group which The Group has placed collapse boundary.

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Agreed with the above.

Best to redraft this so it reads clearly and focuses on one main character.

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

I would start with a lead character and what they want more than anything... and Foxtrot gives great advice.

Unless there is an over arching storyline that will last an entire season then I would use that as your logline.

Foxtrot25 · Mentor · 8,420 pts

Joker,

Unfortunately, I am unable to comprehend your logline. I recommend rewriting. I suspect that English is not your native tongue, however, that shouldn't stand in the way of you organizing a clear and concise description. I suggest you read the formula or copy some of your favorite examples.

Good luck.