The Connect

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In Days when Corona Virus kills humans and community divides to numerous radical ideas, A guilty – feeling boy discovers spiritual and surreal signs, which leads him to enter an alternate world to find his lost sister after his third failed suicide attempts.

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Former member · 114,968 pts

The boy comes off as a weak character, driven by circumstances, "spiritual and surreal signs".

The job a *pro*tagonist is to be *pro*active, to sit in the driver's seat steering the plot, not riding along in the passenger seat in a plot vehicle steered by others or by circumstances.

Odie · Maestro · 6,290 pts

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