First off, don't tell me names of characters (and unless it's SUPER relevant to the plot, which in this case it doesn't feel like it, don't tell me locations either). This is becaus you have no brand recognition for that character, so it doesn't mean anything at this stage.
You logline is "A cop is asked to solve a murder in another town ... and it's difficult."
I'm not hooked by that concept. You need to tell me a story I've never been told before, or tell it in a way that hasn't been done before.
Also -- what is your protagonist's flaw, and what personal stake do they have in the solving of this murder? Murder sucks, but if I'm going to pay $20 for a ticket to this I'm going to want to know that my characters have something personally invested in the resolution of this story.
Also -- cops solving murders is not ironic or a hook in and of themselves. Because that's their job, they're meant to do that. So if it HAS to be a cop solving the murder (and not someone LESS qualified) ... make it so that solving the crime would be harder for them than anyone else. Monk has OCD and is a clean freak. The cop in Fargo is constantly underestimated by the antagonists AND the audience because she's a pregnant woman. Find your OCD/pregnancy and exploit that.