Three best friends return for their high school reunion intent on righting all the wrongs done to them in high school — by either fucking, marrying, or killing their tormentors.

Sounds like an interesting plot, but the use of such vulgar language turned me off.

You need better word choices, believe me, I know.

First of all, I would turn off the "F" bombs. I think it's off-putting. Second, you need to hone in. As other people have commented, it's hard to tell the genre, and to be honest the term "killing" their tormenters in this sense brings up images of school shootings.

Are they after sheer revenge, or something more constructive, such as the reform of someone or the protection of society? More constructive will be more realisitic, more sympathetic and more engaging. Hard to tell genre here, ie. black comedy, horror, action.

"fucking, marrying" -- out of spite, malice, vengeance may be a male fantasy, but it's a turnoff to at least 1/2 of the potential movie audience: women.

"fucking, marrying" -- out of spite, malice, vengeance may be a male fantasy, but it's a turnoff to at least 1/2 of the potential movie audience: women.