Through the Devil’s envy, sin and death came into the world. Therefore, God sent his Son into the world so that through his death and resurrection, the world might be saved.

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“To the Greater Glory of God”

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Odie · Mentor · 6,290 pts

Well, the logline is a broad stroke of Biblical salvation which is difficult to envision on screen, try narrowing down your premise.

Premise examples:
Fall of man: Devil temps Eve, God must act by sending son.
Thirty pieces of silver: Betrayed by one of twelve disciples (Judas), Jesus must act.
The Second Coming of Christ: Worlds “Fallen”, Jesus must act.

Hope you find this constructive, take care.

Presario2200 · Samurai · 1,340 pts

I had looked up the formula before I put that together. I do not know what else to do; just trying to do that was a challenge.