Title: Moose Crossing Logline: While investigating allegations of massive deforestation, John Bear, journalist, discovers a wealthy land owners’ greed-driven attempt to speed up tree growth has accidentally created a new species–super-moose with an insatiable hunger for trees.

Great feedback, than you. I like the concise rewording and the additional character development of the reporter--a better character arc. The moose have a taste for humans instead of trees, whew, that ramps up the tension just a little. Thanks again for your feedback.

Sounds like a cool concept. Probably can shorten and tighten it up a bit.

"A bumbling investigative reporter discovers a mill owner using an illegal formula that speeds up tree growth, but also creates a new species of "super moose"- with a taste for humans!"