To counter a growing malevolence, a young woman in 16th century England, must embrace both her growing powers and her destiny to change the course of history.
Categories: Thriller
7 reviews
>>> chooses to embrace the ancient power of the Wiccan way
How does that translate into a specific objective goal?
>>>to change the course of history.
Specifically, how?? By doing what?
And as Nir Shelter pointed out, how does the ascension of a new king serve as the inciting incident?? How does that trigger her to... well, do whatever she's gotta do to fulfill? her destiny, whatever that is?
Alas, the revised logline still deals in generalities on key elements.? It doesn't provide all information that a movie maker is looking for in a logline,? The? potentially interesting character still seems in search of a plot worthy of her calling (becoming a Wican).
>>> chooses to embrace the ancient power of the Wiccan way
How does that translate into a specific objective goal?
>>>to change the course of history.
Specifically, how?? By doing what?
And as Nir Shelter pointed out, how does the ascension of a new king serve as the inciting incident?? How does that trigger her to... well, do whatever she's gotta do to fulfill? her destiny, whatever that is?
Alas, the revised logline still deals in generalities on key elements.? It doesn't provide all information that a movie maker is looking for in a logline,? The? potentially interesting character still seems in search of a plot worthy of her calling (becoming a Wican).
Is a new king that bad? What is it about this king that makes his arrival so bad?
An inciting incident needs to bring about a clear shift in the balance of the MC's life to motivate her to take action.
How does this king's arrival do that?