Trying to escape from his criminal past, a neurotic fixer must cover up his connection to a recently discovered stash of body parts, all while battling his own grisly hallucinations.

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4 reviews

FFF · Mentor · 8,245 pts

I like the main character, but I think there is a lack of logic: how can the fixer fail? is this his first mission maybe? or someone is setting him up?
Is the fixer a perfectionist, so why does he fail? Is the fixer a clown, so why mafia hired him?

Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

Well, his character flaw is obvious enough: he's so careless? that body parts are not only discovered -- but traced back to him.

One problem I have with the premise is the issue of emotional investment:? why should I care about what happens to him?- How can I care?? He's not legally or morally absolved: he's an accessory to the murders.

I might care for him if he's not just trying to escape, not get caught for his bad deeds -- but he's trying to redeem himself.?? But how?? How can he right the wrongs he has been an accessory to, an enabler of?? It seems to me he's got to be battling more than hallucinations?? What about his conscience?

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dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

Well, his character flaw is obvious enough: he's so careless? that body parts are not only discovered -- but traced back to him.

One problem I have with the premise is the issue of emotional investment:? why should I care about what happens to him?- How can I care?? He's not legally or morally absolved: he's an accessory to the murders.

I might care for him if he's not just trying to escape, not get caught for his bad deeds -- but he's trying to redeem himself.?? But how?? How can he right the wrongs he has been an accessory to, an enabler of?? It seems to me he's got to be battling more than hallucinations?? What about his conscience?

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