Two cultures live side-by-side with little to do with each other until the sins of a white man force the laws of his unknown heritage.

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Outside the Man

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Former member · 114,968 pts

Thank you!

Former member · 114,968 pts

The rewrite is much better than the original. I like Richiev's suggestion as well. Is it possible to add a more antagonistic force? I can imagine that there would also be reluctance from the people of his past as well.

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