EDIT: After her farm goes into foreclosure, a naive cowgirl falls in love with a misogynistic cowboy, only to find out that they both compete against each other for $100,000 at a rodeo event.

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Btw you have two inciting incidents. I would get rid of one.

"Desperate to save her family farm, a dedicated cowgirl must win top prize at the state rodeo, but when she discovers her true love is also competing she must chose between love and family."

Agreed, sweet as a poetry contest could be, it simply doesn't stack up to logic. Poetry could be a hobby of hers something she does on the side, but then it shouldn't be mentioned in the logline.

I like the poetry angle, too, if it involved a cowboy poetry contest -- that would be more authentic to the setting.

But it's a stretch to believe that ?any poetry contest, whether cowboy or slam, ?in Montana or anywhere else, would have a grand prize greater than 4 figures, let alone a 6 figure prize. ?Poetry just doesn't pay much anywhere.

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