When a cocky self made but failing porn producer unknowingly uses stolen money to make the worlds best pornographic film, he must fight off the gangsters who claim it’s their property
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Take It (Working Title)
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Take It (Working Title)
I have to agree with the "Fight off" part. it is vague, good call dpg.
As for what's at stake, it's the film. The film is his work and the gangsters want to take it from him. however if the film was a means to an end. (The money from the film being used to pay for his father surgery or something) it could up the stakes.
"Fight off" -- what does that mean? What's at stake? What does he stand to lose if the gangsters win? What does he stand to gain if he wins? Is he merely fighting over money? Or something more important? Is he -- should he -- be fighting for his life?
Also, what is the time setting for the plot? The present? Before the rise of the Internet?
"Fight off" -- what does that mean? What's at stake? What does he stand to lose if the gangsters win? What does he stand to gain if he wins? Is he merely fighting over money? Or something more important? Is he -- should he -- be fighting for his life?
Also, what is the time setting for the plot? The present? Before the rise of the Internet?