When a devoted ex criminal desired to start a righteous past completes her prison term, she is dragged back into the criminal underworld after her son is kidnapped by her ex crime mob boss and forced to complete numerous tasks, before he ends up dead.

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CraigDGriffiths · Showrunner · 12,600 pts

A reformed ex-convict is forced to xxxx when her old boss kidnaps her son.

You don't need to be too poetic. Add words that can have a direct impact on the visuals of the film. So a person can see what you are describing.

Plus a reformed person desires all the things you talk about.

Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

As Richiev said.

In this version, the protagonist is presented as a passive, helpless victim of circumstances. The logline is a statement of the plot. And the plot is about what a protagonist who is defiantly proactive in the face of adversity.? This version casts the villain, the crime boss, as the character in the driver's seat of the plot.? She needs to be driving the plot -- not him. We know what he is doing.? What is she doing about what he is doing?

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dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

As Richiev said.

In this version, the protagonist is presented as a passive, helpless victim of circumstances. The logline is a statement of the plot. And the plot is about what a protagonist who is defiantly proactive in the face of adversity.? This version casts the villain, the crime boss, as the character in the driver's seat of the plot.? She needs to be driving the plot -- not him. We know what he is doing.? What is she doing about what he is doing?

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