When a dying widower is approached by death with an offer, he must choose between donning the cowl, watching over his daughter or reconnecting with his love in the afterlife.

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I (almost entirely)?agree with FFF.?? It is (almost) always a?bad choice to build a logline on a choice.

A plot is not about having to make a choice.? A plot is about the consequences that flow from the choice the character makes.

(I can think of a possible exception to that rule. But this logline doesn't fall within the parameters of that possible ?exception.)

I (almost entirely)?agree with FFF.?? It is (almost) always a?bad choice to build a logline on a choice.

A plot is not about having to make a choice.? A plot is about the consequences that flow from the choice the character makes.

(I can think of a possible exception to that rule. But this logline doesn't fall within the parameters of that possible ?exception.)