When a gifted nostalgia caseworker disappears, a Man and Woman use their third-mind to relate clues sifted via ghost impressions rising from the dust around them.

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Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

SouthWestSusie,

I neglected to say that I think using Burrough's "third mind" as a narrative device would be a neat trick to pull off in the script proper. ?Particularly since Burroughs got the idea from how ?a causal narrative is constructed in movies. ?But, alas, I fear it's too obscure a reference for most people to get in a logline. ?Transport ?the "third mind" technique on the rails of a strong story line in the script and I think you would have the makings of an interesting movie.

Best wishes.

dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

SouthWestSusie,

I neglected to say that I think using Burrough's "third mind" as a narrative device would be a neat trick to pull off in the script proper. ?Particularly since Burroughs got the idea from how ?a causal narrative is constructed in movies. ?But, alas, I fear it's too obscure a reference for most people to get in a logline. ?Transport ?the "third mind" technique on the rails of a strong story line in the script and I think you would have the makings of an interesting movie.

Best wishes.

Neer Shelter · Legend · 39,985 pts

Isolate the central character and his or her need. What is his or her?motivation to achieving this?