When a highly respectable real estate attorney stumbles on the bullet-ridden body of a client, he must investigate his own firm to uncover their involvement in the murder.

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almiiitey · Samurai · 1,130 pts

Thanks for your feedback. Here's a revised logline.

When a highly respectable real estate attorney stumbles on the bullet-ridden body of a client, he must investigate his own firm to save his reputation.

Do you think this better explains why he does not call the police?

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Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

"...he must investigate his own firm to uncover their involvement in the murder."

Needs an 'and/or' - otherwise, there's no "push" for the main character, he might as well just call the police.