When a man discovers his girlfriend’s heinous secret, he’s forced to turn her in before she strikes again. He creates an elaborate scheme centered around a romantic dinner, but realizes that she’s always a step ahead of him.

What do you conceive to be the hook of your story?

And what is the inciting incident that kicks off the plot-- becoming the prime suspect or the kidnapping of his niece?

What do you conceive to be the hook of your story?

And what is the inciting incident that kicks off the plot-- becoming the prime suspect or the kidnapping of his niece?

Thank you Nir and DPG. ?Excellent input. ?Here's another version:

An innocent man becomes a suspect by the police in a wave of child disappearances. After his own niece is declared missing, he discovers his girlfriend is part of an organ trafficking ring. He has now 24 hours to save his niece and prove his innocence.