‘When a mentally ill patient refuses to leave his home, a probationary constable discovers her training could never prepare her for the deadly lesson she’s about to face.’
Categories: Thriller
6 reviews
As Dkpough1 said.
It's still not clear as to what the jeopardy is, what is at stake. ?What exactly is the "fatal ending" she is trying to prevent? ?A suicide, a homicide?
As Dkpough1 said.
It's still not clear as to what the jeopardy is, what is at stake. ?What exactly is the "fatal ending" she is trying to prevent? ?A suicide, a homicide?
Your first log line is too vague on the action. Your updated log line is better. ?The reason why, because your action is clearer on how the main ?character will try to deal with the event