When a neurotic writer struggles to fix two failing relations, one with his psychotic wife, and the other with his difficult criminal brother, he must do everything in his power to save both relationships, even if it includes breaking his brother out of prison.

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When a neurotic writer struggles to fix two failing relationships, one with his psychotic wife, and the other with his difficult criminal brother, he must do everything in his power to save both relationships, even if it includes breaking his brother out of prison.

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