When a rejected talking golf ball loses his original owner, he teams up with his new friend to enact revenge.

Categories:

More details Hide

Far from Par 2 – The Revenge of Bally

11 reviews

Donn Curbow · Logliner · 315 pts

New friend is Sara..snotty kids ex girlfriend who get's hit by Bally at the end. She's rejected by Josh cause he's now moving on..to something better, he won.

Henry discards Bally for failing to help him win. Bally's beyond mad because he belonged to one of the rich kids before Josh use him to hit Henry in the head.

Henry realizes it's all mental, in which now Sara..being hit..realizes her mental side with Bally..and they use each other to get revenge.

Love of the game..golf..no. All of my golf friends hated the ending to Tin Cup..cause that was a mental ending. In real life, that never happens, but Hollywood spins it to make it mental.

I don't think it's a tough sell..not as Danny DeVito as the voice. Both feed backs on it from down south we're positive, but less golf and more interaction between the characters. And that's what I've pushed for on both the movies. More mental..like real golf.

Thanks
Curbs

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

>>>. And is revenge its ultimate goal? or just the enjoyment of the game?

Good point. A talking golf ball as the MC is a tough concept to sell. What will help sell it is to accentuate the positive not the negative. Sell the character's passion, sheer love for the game - not the urge for revenge.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

>>>. And is revenge its ultimate goal? or just the enjoyment of the game?

Good point. A talking golf ball as the MC is a tough concept to sell. What will help sell it is to accentuate the positive not the negative. Sell the character's passion, sheer love for the game - not the urge for revenge.