When a Russian submarine sailed from Murmansk into the Cuban Missile Crisis, with a nuclear torpedo, Vasili Arkhipov, survivor of the K-19 nuclear disaster, battled PTSD and prevented the captain from destroying the civilized world on the most dangerous day of human history.

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Mike Pedley · Overlord · 13,410 pts ★ Accepted

"battled PTSD" - is there a more visual way to describe what happened? To me, battling PTSD happens largely inside someone's head. I could be wrong having very little experience of PTSD.

The true story of Vasili Arkihipov, who, when his captain is given the order to fire a nuclear torpedo during the Cuban Missile Crisis, risks execution for insubordination by trying to prevent the destruction of the civilised world.

I have no idea whether he risked execution so amend as necessary. I don't think you need a lot of the details of the story to still get the bulk of the story across - his name suggests that he's Russian. I'm not sure you even need to state he survived the K-19 nuclear disaster... although I could very (very) easily be swayed on this. To me the most important components to get across are the fact that it's a true story and that one man single handedly prevented nuclear war.

I'm going to find the book on amazon now as it sounds great!

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

Sounds like an interesting story.? One thing to keep in mind is that a logline should not contain a spoiler -- should not give way how the story ends.? Even though we know the Cuban crisis ended without a catastrophe, the narrative should be framed in terms of what --specifically-- he must do.? ?Not in terms of what he (eventually) does do.

And because it's "inspired by" real events, I suggest the proper genre for marketing purposes is "historical" rather than "thriller".

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

Sounds like an interesting story.? One thing to keep in mind is that a logline should not contain a spoiler -- should not give way how the story ends.? Even though we know the Cuban crisis ended without a catastrophe, the narrative should be framed in terms of what --specifically-- he must do.? ?Not in terms of what he (eventually) does do.

And because it's "inspired by" real events, I suggest the proper genre for marketing purposes is "historical" rather than "thriller".