When a single father to a teenage daughter learns that he has a fatal brain tumor, he takes her on a road trip to find the mother who abandoned her years before and to try to teach her everything she might need over the rest of her life.

After being diagnosed with a brain tumor, a single father takes his reluctant daughter on the ultimate road trip to track down the mother who abandoned her. But does Mom want to be found?

Sounds great! High stakes, ticking clock, inciting incident. What does he have to overcome to make this happen. He has to overcome something/learn something to get the daughter's buy in ......

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