When a toilet embarks on a journey to self discovery, his dreams are flushed away when a catastrophic injury causes his flush valve to remain open.

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3 reviews

CraigDGriffiths · Overlord · 12,600 pts

It needs a rewrite regardless.

Valve being stuck is the obstacle. What does he do to resolve this to reach his/her goal.

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

The Toilet should have a goal. You say his dream is flushed away, tell us what that dream is.