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From what I read the entire film is a few seconds long. A kid witnesses a kidnapping and only has a few seconds to save the person. All done.
I know that is wrong. So drop the unneeded details and focus on the story.
The second half reads like a second attempt at the logline. If you delete everything before "When" you have the start of a good logline.
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