When a woman one day realizes that she sees herself from her husband’s mind, she panicked and looking feverishly for a way out of his brain.
Categories: Drama
Categories: Drama
Hello Stella,
This is very interesting.
This is a fresh idea adding an interesting perspective to close plots like?What Women Want: she ?sees herself through her husband's eyes.
IMO, the most important thing is not her panic and her looking for a way out of his brain; this is the reason why she?does so.
The core of your plot should be her anxiety and the million questions she asks herself about her, her husband, her life, maybe her future (are you sure?she wouldn't be better staying in his mind?...), and how she reacts to the revelations that ensue.
I assume this is the right idea behind your logline.
This can match with many genre:
drama (who's this man I believed I knew? Is he right? how can I live with such a?man? ... hidden secrets, dramatic events...)
psycholigical thriller (beware the husband...)
horror (Arghhhh! he's a vampire/werewolf...)
comedy (beware the best female friend...),
etc.
If your logline were more explicit about the plot, it would be better IMO.
"When a woman realizes she sees herself through?her husband's mind, ..."
Best.
I think it's a good idea, too.? But why stop with her husband's pov?? Think bigger, expand the concept. Why not that she suddenly sees herself from everyone's pov -- her kids, her parents, her friends, her neighbors -- everyone?
I think it's a good idea, too.? But why stop with her husband's pov?? Think bigger, expand the concept. Why not that she suddenly sees herself from everyone's pov -- her kids, her parents, her friends, her neighbors -- everyone?