When a woman’s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.
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The Book of Hammers
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>>You're not really joining the dots
Tell me! And I shouldn't have to join dots. The plot should be obvious, something I, or anyone else reading the logline should immediately grasp.
You describe the cult as "Christian" and then describe their practices as designed to appease "gods". Say what? Those two terms are theologically incommensurate. It's like saying kangaroos lay eggs.
>>You're not really joining the dots
Tell me! And I shouldn't have to join dots. The plot should be obvious, something I, or anyone else reading the logline should immediately grasp.
You describe the cult as "Christian" and then describe their practices as designed to appease "gods". Say what? Those two terms are theologically incommensurate. It's like saying kangaroos lay eggs.
You're not really joining the dots here. That maybe my fault in the logline but my description should have helped?