When a young army colonel is haunted by his time on the battlefield, he must deal with the atrocities his past in order to survive life off the field. Man Down

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7 reviews

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

I concur with Nir Shelter that PTSD is not a character flaw. ?In fact, I have come to think less in terms of a "character flaw" and more in terms of a "vulnerability"which can be a matter of ?a personality defect or a matter of a physical or psychological disability or a matter of a disadvantage in the context of the protagonist's struggle.

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

I concur with Nir Shelter that PTSD is not a character flaw. ?In fact, I have come to think less in terms of a "character flaw" and more in terms of a "vulnerability"which can be a matter of ?a personality defect or a matter of a physical or psychological disability or a matter of a disadvantage in the context of the protagonist's struggle.

JustinEade · Penpusher · 50 pts

A little on the vague side - no great hook which would make me want to see, or anything intriguing about the main character hinted at. Plus, grammatically incorrect, a word missing