When a young woman’s grandmother selfishly dies whilst visiting their ancestral Outback town she, and her disparate sister, reluctantly stay on and inadvertently uncover their family’s sordid past, forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities.

The first line confuses me - does the Grandmother die 'whilst' they are visiting their ancestral home, or does the death of the grandmother take them home? Your challenge with your logline will be to provide enough information to suggest that this is not simply another death = personal journey movie (ie; August Osage County, the Savages etc). What makes your movie unique?

>>selfishly dies

How is dying "selfishly" different from dying normally?

>>forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities

What does that specifically mean? As a result of the discovery of her family's sordid past, what MUST she do? What becomes her objective goal?

>>selfishly dies

How is dying "selfishly" different from dying normally?

>>forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities

What does that specifically mean? As a result of the discovery of her family's sordid past, what MUST she do? What becomes her objective goal?