When an intergalactic refugee crash-lands at his farm, a timid teenager must find the courage to protect the exile and himself from malicious space hunters.

Okay.? I suggest being more specific as to his refugee status.??Like, he's fleeing political and ethnic persecution in his own world.

The parallels to current earthly refugee crises?are obvious and, imho, ?could be leveraged to allegorical effect enhancing the thematic value of the concept.???

That would make for ?a short film I would like to see.? Best wishes.

Okay.? I suggest being more specific as to his refugee status.??Like, he's fleeing political and ethnic persecution in his own world.

The parallels to current earthly refugee crises?are obvious and, imho, ?could be leveraged to allegorical effect enhancing the thematic value of the concept.???

That would make for ?a short film I would like to see.? Best wishes.

This idea is for a short film, I appreciate the feedback. I will go over my notes and try for a better logline, cheers.