When disobedient space peacemaker reveal hellish plan wealthiest clans on the planet and space invaders to eliminate the excess population of the planet, has again breaks all the rules in order to save the human race and the human woman he loves.

When a lone space ranger discover that the alien relocation plan agreed by the wealthiest earth families include the culling of all human indesirables, he must go rogue to save humanity and the woman he loves.

"The nuances of the grammar make it pretty clear that English is not the native language. Go easy on Babaroga."

Understood, i didn't intend any offence - my intention was to respond to the logilne as presented. This is how it would be consumed in the real world, where it has to stand on it's own without further explanation. If my tone seemed harsh then I'll moderate in future. My own feeling is that anything less than an honest and direct response to the material is helpful to no-one and I anticipate the same of anything I post.

Barbaroga - I hope this didn't offend.

"I found it quite cumbersome to read"

The nuances of the grammar make it pretty clear that English is not the native language. Go easy on Babaroga.

"If the protagonist is disobedient and already a rule-breaker, where is the inner conflict?"

If this guy is in trouble for disobeying a direct order, then there is plenty of inner conflict as he struggles with whether to break another rule (and lose his job) or not based on a suspicion he has. Usually, in these types of stories, the protagonist has nothing more than a hunch about a "hellish plan" and faces charges of disobedient behavior if he investigates further and he can't convince anyone else of what is at stake.

"It would be stronger if it were an obedient character who has to break some of those rules to save the day."

True, but an obedient character wouldn't struggle to convince his boss that there is a problem. The interpersonal conflict is gone.