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This is a great idea I hope you write it.
Thank you sharkeatingman, I agree. I've revised it:
When all plant-life on Earth ascends into space, forming a gigantic spherical
forest, a gifted space captain and his crew must journey into its labyrinthine caverns before humanity starves.
Great concept, but the logline is a bit busy and wordy. Try to reduce it to bare minimums, if possible (25-30 words max). Some things do not need mentioning in logline, like the boy speaking "plant". Your hook is the uprooting and the "Space Jungle" concept. Very unique.
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