When he notices that the camera-man on set is an alien planning on taking over the world, the percipient lead actor must convince the rest of the crew to save the planet.

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4 reviews

Odie · Mentor · 6,290 pts

Dig it, leaning towards:
“An indie film star and his reluctant crew must save humanity when an out-of-this-world cameraman attempts to steal the show – and the planet.”

Make this yours, take care.

svasta · Penpusher · 65 pts

Maybe emphasise that the actor is in the biggest production yet. For example "When he notices that the camera-man on the biggest film of his life..."

Also, could be a funny twist if the reason no one believed him is that everyone else is an alien too and they're trying to keep the secret - not really a logline addition though.

Overall I really like the concept and think it'd be really funny.

Ben · Penpusher · 35 pts

Be careful on the length of your piece, this story could be written at any length.

Aside from that it's a really well written logline.