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A single mother joins a cult of submissive women to rescue her abducted teenage daughter and take down the dangerous cult leader.
As Karel said.
The inciting incident "When her rebellious daughter is abducted by a sinister cult" has promising prospects, but what does "follow into the wilderness" really mean? If it means, she must literally trek to a wilderness to locate her daughter, well, that's mildly interesting.
But much more interesting to me would be a story where she must join the cult, feign blind loyalty to the cult leader and submission to the cult doctrines. She has to convincingly fake it as a true believer in order to locate and rescue her daughter.
A complicating factor in terms of her character might be that she is a thoroughly modern, secular, militant and atheist feminist: in order to save her daughter she has to violate everything she is and believes in.
As Karel said.
The inciting incident "When her rebellious daughter is abducted by a sinister cult" has promising prospects, but what does "follow into the wilderness" really mean? If it means, she must literally trek to a wilderness to locate her daughter, well, that's mildly interesting.
But much more interesting to me would be a story where she must join the cult, feign blind loyalty to the cult leader and submission to the cult doctrines. She has to convincingly fake it as a true believer in order to locate and rescue her daughter.
A complicating factor in terms of her character might be that she is a thoroughly modern, secular, militant and atheist feminist: in order to save her daughter she has to violate everything she is and believes in.
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