When his kinky girlfriend is apprehended by bounty hunters, a rich playboy is forced to team up with a hot-headed southern belle, as they delve into the seedy world of LA’s high-class S&M society, hoping to uncover clues to her whereabouts.

As Richiev said.? ?If there's a bounty on her head, then there's no mystery where she is; she will have been booked into the Sybil Brand facility for women in the L.A. County jail system pending her trial.? ?If there's a contract on her head put there by a gangster, then who knows where she is.

A bounty is legal; a contract is extra-legal.? Which one applies?

As Richiev said.? ?If there's a bounty on her head, then there's no mystery where she is; she will have been booked into the Sybil Brand facility for women in the L.A. County jail system pending her trial.? ?If there's a contract on her head put there by a gangster, then who knows where she is.

A bounty is legal; a contract is extra-legal.? Which one applies?

Mikepedley85:
Pretty good rewrite and in 28 words versus 41 words in the original.

Alanhyde:
We often ask questions the answers to which we know will not be in the logline.? We ask them because the logline raises questions when it should only raise curiosity in reading the script.? When a? logline? doesn't seem to? convey a concise (41 words is too long for a logline) and clear statement what the plot is about.

fwiw