When his teenage son is murdered, a detective hesitated to bring the presumed killer to justice, after learning about their secret love affair.

What the ?others have said.

Particularly FFF. ?Loglines are descriptions of plots and plots are not about a choice that has to be made or hesitating making a choice. ?Loglines are about what happens after a choice is made.

What the ?others have said.

Particularly FFF. ?Loglines are descriptions of plots and plots are not about a choice that has to be made or hesitating making a choice. ?Loglines are about what happens after a choice is made.

Hello,
here's my rule of thumb for loglines:
never build a logline about a choice or a hesitation.
(I personally don't like the loglines that doesn't respect this rule. The reason is that the movie seems to not move forewards, it's like stuck in a ping pong situation. The focus should be on the actual goal more than about the ping pong).