When she inadvertently creates an empathetic AI in her online search for Mr. Right, a lonely computer programmer, comes under intense government scrutiny, which leaves her with only one option—interacting with a human.

Good points made by Richiev and DPG.

I'll make the same suggestion I previously made on the older version - why not write it from the AI's point of view?

He or she has the most to lose - it's a life and death situation for him or her. Logically, the fight for survival, when coupled with a fight for love, would elevate the sci-fi elements in your story.

The logline starts with a potentially interesting story hook -- a character clever enough to create an empathetic AI -- then buries it for another story line that has no hook.? Why?

And that her nemesis is a government conspiracy is a tired, overused and in this case illogical trope.? By illogical I mean there is no obvious reason why the government would want to shut her down.? If she wrote a program that could hack the NSA or the CIA network -- yeah, it's obvious why they would hassle her, want to shut her down.? But for creating an empathetic AI?? Why? What's the government's motive?

The logline starts with a potentially interesting story hook -- a character clever enough to create an empathetic AI -- then buries it for another story line that has no hook.? Why?

And that her nemesis is a government conspiracy is a tired, overused and in this case illogical trope.? By illogical I mean there is no obvious reason why the government would want to shut her down.? If she wrote a program that could hack the NSA or the CIA network -- yeah, it's obvious why they would hassle her, want to shut her down.? But for creating an empathetic AI?? Why? What's the government's motive?