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Hi,
this sounds like an interesting take on Jaws I suppose. Does it have to be a nude beach? It might just limit your audience or pigeon hole it a bit - you might be going for this though. I agree picked off sounds like a sniper in the dunes. It wasn't until I read to the end I linked shark + beach etc...
When swimmers at a nudist beach become prey to an unseen terror....
"Picked off" implies to me being shot by a sniper.
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