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^ I agree 100%. "To live" is such a vague, subjective term. There has to be a clear, concrete, visual goal that you can say "my protagonist is trying to do THIS ONE SPECIFIC THING, which will signify to the audience that he has lived his life."
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Title: Dying to Live
I suggest he ought to be running away not just to live more fully in general, but to fulfill a specific dream (objective goal). As to the nature of that dream -- well, there are so many choices. Take your pick.
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