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You really need to be more specific and clear. You need a main character and a goal or mission.
This is the most unspecific logline I have seen in awhile. Kriss' comments are good.
What's the bad news? What will she do to get over it? What will happen if she doesn't? This sounds like a line for many films involving someone who receives bad news so what makes yours different and stand out? This is far too vague so far.
Love the title though.
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