Whole human beeing fight for the lost planet earth against the majestically, though, imperfect fallen angel.

When all of humanity fights for planet earth against an imperfect fallen angel...

Good advice Karel, I wan't quite sure how to approach this one but you summed it up quite well.

Hi Alexander,

It seems like you're struggling with grammar and spelling. Make sure the logline is perfect in those areas.

Then, check out https://loglines.org/howto and you'll be able to write a much improved next draft to the logline.

At this point I can recommend to limit your main character to one, rather than the entire human kind (which I believe you wanted to say).

Good luck!