Working title: MISSLE (or GOD OF DESTRUCTION) Logline: After helplessly witnessing his brother murdered by a vicious gang, a disabled man in LA sets out one night on his homemade killing machine to seek vengeance.
Categories: Action
Categories: Action
Really good suggestion by Richiev.
on a side note. Your story needs a side character that helps the audience relate to the lead character by seeing the lead though their eyes. Part of what helped us understand Clint Eastwood's character in Gran Torino is he side relationships with the family next door. (And the young priest)
The good news is, the gang your lead character is after probably made enemies among the neighborhood, ?at a keep point the meek neighbors should take up arms and help the lead out.
This sounds awesome and nuts. I'm in.