1. Posted: January 25, 2014In:

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    For what I've found you don't want to use fluff words, but finding his dad is a great goal. It's very tangible. It's does he or does he not. I think it does leave a lot of room for exploring his mental illness as well (cause that's what it seems like he's struggling with.)

    For what I’ve found you don’t want to use fluff words, but finding his dad is a great goal. It’s very tangible. It’s does he or does he not. I think it does leave a lot of room for exploring his mental illness as well (cause that’s what it seems like he’s struggling with.)

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  2. Posted: January 25, 2014In:

    After a former star witness is kidnapped by an escaped (or exonerated) killer she must find a way to stop him as he hunts down the jury members who convicted him.

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    Thank you, yeah. I'm getting the basic bones of it together right now. Just seeing if it's worth writing. I think it as. I've gotten my plot points together and I like what I have. After I get my treatment together I'll do some research to see if there's a better way to do things than what I figureRead more

    Thank you, yeah. I’m getting the basic bones of it together right now. Just seeing if it’s worth writing. I think it as. I’ve gotten my plot points together and I like what I have. After I get my treatment together I’ll do some research to see if there’s a better way to do things than what I figure out. But I do want your opinion, do you think it’s a worthwhile story? I’ve seen some more over the top fantasy plots here and I’ve seen more independent personal dramas, but me I’m more of a gritty personal thriller. So I do want opinions as far as if its worth while.

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  3. Posted: January 25, 2014In:

    After a former star witness is kidnapped by an escaped (or exonerated) killer she must find a way to stop him as he hunts down the jury members who convicted him.

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    Not every jury is anonymous. Some places it's not a requirement. They just don't go and and physically post them somewhere. They did in the Casey Anthony case and she got off. It might just be a library news paper thing and then looking the people themselves up manually. I don't plan to have this doRead more

    Not every jury is anonymous. Some places it’s not a requirement. They just don’t go and and physically post them somewhere. They did in the Casey Anthony case and she got off. It might just be a library news paper thing and then looking the people themselves up manually. I don’t plan to have this done over night so I have time to figure out the logistics, but it’s not completely impossible.

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