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  1. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 1:07 pm

    Hey Presario, I hate to ask while reviewing someone else's line, but could you give mine a look at? it's the one under this. Sterling, although you may plan for a miniseries. You still have to have something concrete. You may even want to work on a spec script before coming to a whole series. I'm noRead more

    Hey Presario, I hate to ask while reviewing someone else’s line, but could you give mine a look at? it’s the one under this.

    Sterling, although you may plan for a miniseries. You still have to have something concrete. You may even want to work on a spec script before coming to a whole series.

    I’m not sure if you’re a beginner writer or not, and if not, I don’t mean to offend, but if you want I can recommend some books on writing. Just so you can see how the plot structure plays out.

    I’ve found that knowing how it all culminates is important to knowing how to try to piece even the plot out.

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  2. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 12:27 pm

    You don't need to give the characters name in a logline. Still, living with passion and bliss isn't a tangible goal. You can't measure that. Films are about did he or did he not. What is going to have to do to get his bliss? Does he have to obtain a certain item that will give him bliss? If so, youRead more

    You don’t need to give the characters name in a logline. Still, living with passion and bliss isn’t a tangible goal. You can’t measure that. Films are about did he or did he not. What is going to have to do to get his bliss? Does he have to obtain a certain item that will give him bliss? If so, you could do a thing like he gets the object, but realizes it wasn’t the object he was looking for, it was the journey that got him the object that gave him is bliss.

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  3. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 12:00 pm

    This is very ominous. Please give more detail. Actually, first what's the goal of the main character? It has to be tangible. I'd give a suggestion, but what you've left is so vague that it's hard to give you even that.

    This is very ominous. Please give more detail.

    Actually, first what’s the goal of the main character? It has to be tangible. I’d give a suggestion, but what you’ve left is so vague that it’s hard to give you even that.

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