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  1. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    After a former star witness is kidnapped by an escaped (or exonerated) killer she must find a way to stop him as he hunts down the jury members who convicted him.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 2:25 pm

    It is a concern, but that could be up to personality types. That would be the most logical thing to do, stay straight, but I'm thinking another person may want revenge on who put him there. I mentally toyed with both but I just think it adds more of a dramatic sense if he really was innocent to begiRead more

    It is a concern, but that could be up to personality types. That would be the most logical thing to do, stay straight, but I’m thinking another person may want revenge on who put him there. I mentally toyed with both but I just think it adds more of a dramatic sense if he really was innocent to begin with and we know shes the reason he’s there to begin with.

    I’m having a harder time figuring out how he would go about finding a record of who was the jurors on his case a decade ago.

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  2. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    After a former star witness is kidnapped by an escaped (or exonerated) killer she must find a way to stop him as he hunts down the jury members who convicted him.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 2:09 pm

    Well, now I've put some work into it. It's fleshed out more now and I've decided on the either/or. I'm looking more for advice on the overall plot now and where I can take it.... or if I should even pursue it. Here's what it's looking like now: When a twenty-something convenience store clerk witnessRead more

    Well, now I’ve put some work into it. It’s fleshed out more now and I’ve decided on the either/or. I’m looking more for advice on the overall plot now and where I can take it…. or if I should even pursue it.

    Here’s what it’s looking like now:

    When a twenty-something convenience store clerk witnesses a murder, she wrongfully identifies the killer. Now, a decade later she?s at the mercy of the exonerated convict as he kidnaps her and hunts down the jury members who convicted him.

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  3. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 1:34 pm

    I posted a log line for review. It's the one about the exonerated killer hunting down the jury members who convicted him. Sorry, Sterling asking on your logline.

    I posted a log line for review. It’s the one about the exonerated killer hunting down the jury members who convicted him. Sorry, Sterling asking on your logline.

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